Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 1 June 2016

2016.06.01 Class 31

Comparative and superlative adjectives in Tibetan!
FCE Exam – Writing part 2

Today we're going to review how to write articles (from Writing part 2) for the FCE. First we'll do an activity to get you thinking and talking about a topic, and then we'll use that topic to write an article in class.

The topic: Learning how to do something new

1) With a partner, talk about something new you'd like to learn (e.g. to play the guitar) and brainstorm how you could learn it (e.g. taking classes from your uncle).
Note that you learn to do something and that you can learn it (by) taking a class.
2) I tell you about a time I learned to do something new and you ask me any questions you have about it when I'm done.
Note the use of the narrative tenses (past simple, past continuous, past perfect) in my description and be aware of them as you prepare your own explanation.
3) Think about how you can explain something new that you learned to do.

4) Take turns describing how you learned to do something new. Ask each other questions, give suggestions and give each other constructive feedback.
Did any of the ideas from 1) above get used?
5) We watch a video in which a new skill is being learned. Did they use any of the methods from 1) above?

6) Look at this vocabulary (p2). Match the words in circles to words in a diamond (◊) to make collocations from the video.

FCE - Articles

1) Now we'll prepare a writing task for Part 2 of the Writing exam, an article. Look at the model article on SBp22 and with your partner:
  • Describe the style and tone of the article.
  • Where does the article speak directly to the reader? Do you like this?
  • Compare other model articles and useful tips on writing them on SBp70 and p91.
  • There's also a useful model article on LE Teens, but you can look at that after class.

2) Here's a summary of the Key tips for writing an article:
  • Plan your article based on the instructions
  • Give it a creative title 
  • Try to interest the readers using language like 'Have you ever wondered ...?', 'How would you feel if ...?', etc.
  • Give reasons for your opinions and, if time allows, examples of them
  • When you finish, check that:
    • it's long enough (at least 140 words)
    • it has two or more paragraphs
    • it answers the questions in the instructions
    • it has an appropriate style
3) Now let's look at an article from a real student and exam and see how it was marked. This is on p.27 of the FCE Teacher's Handbook (but we won't look at the feedback at first). With your partner, consider:
Does this article follow the tips in 2) above? What strengths does it have? What weaknesses? What marks would you give it for:
    • Content (follows the instructions)
    • Communicative Achievement (style of an article, clarity of ideas)
    • Organisation (paragraphing, linking words)
    • Language (grammar & vocab) 


4) Now you're going to begin preparing an answer to the following exam prompt:


The most useful thing I have ever learned.

   What is the most useful thing you have learned?
  Who did you learn it from? Why is it useful?

Write an article answering these questions.

We will publish the best articles on our website.


Plan your article with a partner:
  • Think of where you've learned things. Obviously at school, but where else?
  • What skill do you use a lot (and therefore is useful)? Or maybe a skill is useful because you enjoy it so much?
  • Once you've chosen a skill, think about who you learned it from and why you wanted (or had to) learn it. 
  • Why is it useful? (be creative)
  • Think about which paragraphs these ideas will go in.
  • Think of a title.
Then, start writing your articles individually. Remember to follow the rest of the Key tips in 2) above.

Homework


  • Your weekly 75 minutes of contact, which should include finishing the article you started in class.

Wednesday, 25 May 2016

2016.05.25 Class 30

Exam practice


Today we began by reviewing the Writing paper. We looked in depth at writing emails, and you wrote an email based on the prompt on SBp14.

We then turned to the Use of English. You did a part 4 exercise (transformations) that I created based on the grammar that appeared in the last exam you took. Most of you did much better than you did on the exam.

After the break, we did Listening part 2 practice and then spent the rest of class practicing for the Speaking paper. You practised with each other to prepare for part 1 and then you took turns to do part 2 in pairs, with feedback from your classmates.

Homework


  • continue your self-study for 75 minutes

Wednesday, 18 May 2016

2016.05.18 Class 29

Exam tasks

Today we continued intensive work on exam tasks, since the exam is just a few weeks away. You completed a quick on the Use of English paper from the last exam and corrected it together. Use of Englishes from past exams are a great resource to study!

I also returned your reviews, which were good, and I gave you general feedback on them. Several of you barely or nearly passed the last exam, which is good news!

We also did some Reading and Use of English practice on SBp74 and p77.

Finally, after the break, we reviewed the Speaking parts 2, 3 and 4 using SBp76 and p84.

Homework

  • Continue with the progress chart (see last class): spend at least 75 minutes working on English this week. You should view the video of a speaking exam in YouTube (for example, the one below or any other you find by searching for 'FCE Speaking 2015'). Then do whatever else you think is best.

Wednesday, 11 May 2016

2016.05.11 Class 28

Mock exam

Today we continue and more or less finish the mock exam. We begin with Writing:

Writing part 2 – Reviews

We reviewed the format and important points to consider when writing reviews on SBp38 and pp93. There's also a useful one on LE Teens.

Use of English

We reviewed the Use of English section you took on the last mock exam. It's extremely important to learn from your mistakes in the Use of English, so next week you'll have a quiz on this same exam.

Homework

Wednesday, 27 April 2016

2016.04.27 Class 26

Flood in Hanoi, Vietnam

Homework and disasters

Today we begin class by reviewing your homework and extending it a bit.

First, below this post are the answers to your homework from the SB. If you missed class, you can correct your own work. Use this opportunity to develop your vocabulary! Even just five minutes of work is valuable.

Then we looked at the Disaster Preparedness Quiz that you had to read, talking about a few words I thought you might have found difficult:
  1. strike (in title)
  2. drills (Q1)
  3. power (Q2)
  4. looting (Q3)
  5. chance (Q5)
  6. seat-back pocket safety card | odds (Q6)
  7. patterns (Q8)
You wrote reasons for your answers and discussed them with a partner. Then I showed you the official answers, which are based on a lot of research and we discuss which are surprising and why.

I hope not, but maybe this information will be useful for you one day. I know I'll be looking to see where the exit is next I'm on a plane!

We also looked at an exercise that deals with five key words from the Disaster Quiz:
  1. drill - noun: tool for making holes | repetitive activity to practise - verb:
  2. effect - noun: result | 'special effects' | possessions - verb: 
  3. problem - noun: something needing attention
  4. odds - noun: the probability (likelihood) of something happening =~ chance
  5. strike - verb: stop work | hit | remove | discover | happen - noun: failure

Mock Exam

We began a mock exam, doing the Use of English (parts 1-4) and then Listening parts 1 and 3. Next week we'll continue.

We ended class with another game of Jeopardy – in the end, it was a draw between the two teams since they both bet everything on the question 'After oxygen, what is the most abundant element in the earth's crust?' (answer)

Homework

Since most of you seem to have exams at school this week, there is no homework for next week. But be prepared to do a writing task for homework next week!

If possible, you should study vocabulary and read. In Quizlet, there are lots of different FCE-preparation lists that you could study in addition to the ones from our class.

Wednesday, 10 February 2016

2016.02.10 Class 16

Today I handed back the compositions you wrote for part 2 of the Writing test. Many of you got failing marks for this task simply because you didn't follow the instructions. It's a real shame to fail a task that you could easily have passed simply because you didn't read the instructions!

Today we worked in Unit 4 of the new book. We worked through pages 32-33 of the SB, which involved vocabulary and Reading part 6 practice.

We then did a series of activities related to film (a brief bio of Daisy Ridley) and numbers ('Massive numbers'). Finally, you did a quiz on part 2 of the Use of English that you had on the most recent exam.

Homework:
  • bring a (clean) joke to tell to the class
  • bring ideas for a debate
  • SB p.33 ex 6 and 7

Friday, 15 January 2016

2016.01.13 Class 12


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To get back into things in the new year, we did a Post-holiday activity at one point in which you had to come up with the questions to some answers.

We also discussed the mid-year Assessment, which is essentially a nearly complete FCE exam that you'll be completing in the next few classes. Your grade on this will give us a sense for how ready you are to take a real exam or not. Remember that it's essential for you to have contact with English and to study outside of class - just coming to class is no guarantee that you'll be ready for the exam by the summer.

Writing - stories
We went over some general comments on the stories that you handed in to me in Class 10:
  1. The first line of the story should be integrated into the story, not separate in any way.
  2. Paragraphs are essential! You will almost certainly get a mark lower than 3 for a story with inappropriate paragraphing.
  3. A story that takes place over years is probably more difficult than a shorter-term one.
  4. Be specific! Use examples and descriptive words. For example, instead of saying 'She was beautiful and kind', you could say 'She turned heads wherever she went, yet she treated everyone with kindness.'
  5. Beware of run-on sentences and comma splices. Look under Useful links on the right side of this page for explanations and exercises.


Reading (homework over the holidays)
We talked about the story you were assigned to read for homework, as well as the vocabulary that you found when you read it. You should study the vocabulary from the reading, which we'll put into Quizlet soon.

FCE Speaking
We also talked about Speaking parts 1 and 2, practiced some questions from part 1 in class and watched a video of an exam on Youtube.


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We also watched the first 12 minutes of The Way Way Back, the film which we'll be watching in short segments over the next several weeks.

Some vocabulary to note from the beginning of the film:
  • on a scale of 1 to 10
  • This is it!
  • to fall off the wagon
  • my ride
  • She's a walking mood.
  • a lazy eye
  • Screw that!

Homework: none - enjoy! Just be ready for an exam in the first part of class in the next two weeks.

Wednesday, 11 November 2015

Model essay (SB p.13)

This is a quick model answer I wrote in response to the question on p.13 of the SB, which was assigned as homework for Class 5. It's a bit longer (227 words) than the recommended length of 140-190 words.

It is often said that the elderly can teach the young valuable lessons based on their experience. I agree with this idea, though I think the young must also be sure to think for themselves.

Older people certainly know the history of their time period better than the young and also have the benefit of a longer life experience. This often enables them to see the present more clearly than the young and they can tell us how they dealt with similar situations in the past. When I tell my grandfather about the things I'm worried about, his advice is almost always good.

Many people say that the older generation doesn't know anything about technology, but this is completely false. They may not know about the latest digital technologies, but my grandfather never took his car to the garage - he always repaired it myself. And my best friend's grandfather built the house my friend lives in, without anyone else's help!

Finally, we can also learn from the older generation's mistakes. In their time, for example, sexism and racism were normal and caused a great deal of suffering to many people. We can learn about the ill effects of these attitudes and better avoid them ourselves.

It is therefore abundantly clear that the elderly can pass on valuable knowledge and perspectives that will help today's young people.

Wednesday, 21 October 2015

Writing essays

Here are a couple of good resources for writing essays:

LearnEnglishTeens opinion essay
LearnEnglishTeens for and against essay

Writing - miscellaneous resources

Run-on sentences and comma splices

Here are some links to useful resources on run-on sentences, comma splices and sentence fragments – all of which you must avoid in any neutral or formal writing for the FCE.